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200 word challange – descriptive language

200 Word Challenge – Descriptive Language

Look at the picture below carefully and complete the table.
Check on the next page for Step 2.

Who is in the photo?
A climber and a photographer
What is happening in the photo?
A photo shoot
Where was the photo taken?
In the mountains
What makes this exciting?
It’s exciting because there doing a photo shoot
How do you think the characters feel?
Climber: I think the climber feels scared because it looks like he has no ropes.
Photographer: i think the photographer is nervous because

Write a 200 Word recount as either the CLIMBER or the PHOTOGRAPHER.

Remember; your challenge is to use DESCRIPTIVE Language to SHOW, not TELL your audience what is happening.

Begin your writing here: Hello i am a professional climber, today i received a letter from a photographer asking if i want to do a climbing photo shoot.

I read the letter and there was a phone number on the letter that said “call me if interested” I called him and he said “meet at the mountains” so we met and then we began our photo shoot.

When we began our photo shoot he first told me to put on safety equipment incase if i fall.

When I finished putting on my safety equipment, he asked me to hang on the rocks where I could climb so I did.

He told me to do a serious face like if i was actually climbing a mountain.

When we finished the first photo he showed it to me then he asked me if i can do more photos and i said sure so we did heaps more photos and we did on video where i was actually climbing the mountain to the top.

When i got to the top i had to take a break and when I was done I had to climb down from the mountain. When I got down from the top he showed me all the photos and he asked me if he could post it on his youtube page.

200 word challenge

200 Word Challenge

 

The 200 Word Challenge is an opportunity to practice writing using just the right words. 200 Words might sound like a lot, but once you get going you’ll find yourself crossing that line easily, so be careful to only say what you NEED to. 

(This whole thing is over 100 words already)

 

For Week One your challenge is to write a 200 word recount of a time you…

 

Tasted the best food you’ve ever tasted.

 

Remember! This week we have been learning about chronological order. Make sure you get the sequence of events in the right order.

 

Begin your writing here: The best food i’ve ever tasted were heaps of things like are.

Hello my name is Tatiana, today is October 12 2023, yesterday my dad prepared me some breakfast. He prepared some pancakes and some chicken and chips because it was a special day yesterday for me. My dad prepares me breakfast 2 times a week. My favourite food is chicken and chips for breakfast or pancakes for breakfast. On friday last week my mum had no work so she prepared me some banana and nutella pancakes for breakfast. It was so good I had heaps until I was full. The nutella and banana were stuffed into the pancake. There were so many of them so I nearly finished all of them. Today I made my own breakfast. I made a strawberry mango apple watermelon dragon fruit salad. It was so good I also put some ice and sprite with strawberry milk. It’s called hwachae. It was so refreshing that I could eat it all day. On monday my sister made some breakfast. She cooked coco rice she made it so fast it was so good she made sugar using her own ingredients and it tasted like she put sugarcane in it.

 

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